How's about citing the research on which you based your article. Not that I'm necessarily doubting the content, but it's appropriate to provide evidence for claims.

You make many claims that are... metaphorical, shall we say? For instance, "...oxytocin is the dominant chemical that floods her body." I would prefer a more factual account. Having the links would allow me to do that. Without them, I'm left to speculate - perhaps incorrectly - on what these statements may actually mean and imply.